Showing posts with label writing the stories. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing the stories. Show all posts

Wednesday, March 4, 2015

Writing the Stoies: Eileen gets the mail...







Gorgeous snow fell, headlong, self-propelled objects.  They knew they wanted to hit the ground, yet disliked the curious bumping into one another.  The flakes looked erratic and senseless.  A wind kicked up a distraction, and danced the snow like Tasmanian devils – move, move, move…  In the final three feet of descent, the crystals cascaded, indistinguishable, heaped all together at the edge of Eileen’s porch.



The blizzard finally petered out mid-morning. 



School was cancelled.  Neighborhood children had been yelling and throwing the snow from one yard to the next most of the morning.  Women bundled little ones and plunked them in the powder while they held steaming coffees and compared stories.  Bent old men and grumbling teenagers shoveled paths from their doors to the road.  Someone had thought to shovel a path for Eileen, but it was still covered with a thin layer of ice. It was not a good idea to take her hip on a walk for the mail until she could clearly see the pavement of her driveway.  Until the road had been warmed by cars of the young and brave.
 

Heavy snow kept her locked up like a naughty child in timeout, forgotten.  She heard all the glee and energy from inside her house and felt punished.  Eileen waved at the Zimmerman boys as they shoveled sidewalks, but they could not see her... 

Friday, February 27, 2015

Writing the Stories: Snow...



That was the last time he stopped believing.  Believing in snow. 

Snow had been in the stories she had told, but even those were hard to find anymore.  Where libraries and book stores once were stood clinics.  Dispensaries.  Wards.  Gone were books, and gone were the writers.  You could always tell those that came from the lineage of writers.  The muscles around their eyes were tight, straining to see just up ahead.  Furrowed brows and pursed lips were give-aways.  And they clustered together, talking in furtive voices.  Their hands moved like quick, small birds.  That’s how her hands moved.  Like tiny daggers, emphasizing mere words.


(Just a short "finger exercise" from yesterday's writing.)